She reached around to grab the house key out her purse, her face turning to profile. The sun was hot, and I glanced back to hurry her along. Her mouth was twisted that quirky way that it always is when she's concentrating. My eyes narrowed for a blink, what was wrong with her face? I studied her for the moment she was turned away from me. The cute dimples creases at the edges of her mouth were now deep set lines. I felt like I hadn't noticed until that particular moment. How had I been missing such a change?
In the space of a second, I saw the sorrows of over a decade of secrets in it's physical manifestation. She was still beautiful, but those subtle lines told the tales that she has yet to.
I don't know if she'll ever heal completely, or if the bruised and broken parts have already closed up over crooked bones.
Monday, July 21, 2008
as deep as lines.
Posted by Godspeedanna at 8:34 PM
Labels: narrative, sisters, sorrow, true story
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1 comments:
I pretty much made a whole blog just so I could comment on this post.
that is probably one of the saddest and most beautiful stories I have heard.
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