She reached around to grab the house key out her purse, her face turning to profile. The sun was hot, and I glanced back to hurry her along. Her mouth was twisted that quirky way that it always is when she's concentrating. My eyes narrowed for a blink, what was wrong with her face? I studied her for the moment she was turned away from me. The cute dimples creases at the edges of her mouth were now deep set lines. I felt like I hadn't noticed until that particular moment. How had I been missing such a change?
In the space of a second, I saw the sorrows of over a decade of secrets in it's physical manifestation. She was still beautiful, but those subtle lines told the tales that she has yet to.
I don't know if she'll ever heal completely, or if the bruised and broken parts have already closed up over crooked bones.
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Monday, July 21, 2008
as deep as lines.
Posted by Godspeedanna at 8:34 PM
Labels: narrative, sisters, sorrow, true story
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1 comments:
I pretty much made a whole blog just so I could comment on this post.
that is probably one of the saddest and most beautiful stories I have heard.
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